Buuuf, the thing is difficult Aaron! I personally really like the photo of Times Square (I think that's not it? ..) with the guy and the I love bags .. I think you have put some post but it has been very good. The skylines of super Bordaic buildings all, the photo of the woman looking up very good too, the eagle, the fair I like a lot too ... I don't know. All in general but these in particular for me are special.
Thank you laGuarda. Your comments help me to see if the group is encouraged to comment a bit. Review. criticism I like criticism. If it is Time Square, I have put one without a post and another without. The one with the woman looking up goes a long way with this macro city, that you are looking up all the time, it is taken from the statue of liberty, so she has that curiosity. Thanks for encouraging you to comment. a greeting
The set of illuminated windows and others in the dark seems very original to me; The cyclist with the bags and the woman looking up have reached me more than others ... and the one with the row of cars with the bridge at the back, although technically not the best for me, it gives me a very special vibe. .. They are all very good Aaron, you have it chungillo to make the selection ...
https://www.domestika.org/portfolios/mariet
Indeed, the one with the bridge at the back is not very good technically, what happens is that I did it with a pretty bad camera the first day I arrived, then taking advantage of the fact that I was there, I bought a good machine. The thing is that I like the framing, I'll have to play with photoshop again to see if I get something better. Thank you
I like many, but individually. Right now I think you should start making a selection of images since more than a personal work it seems a collective one, that is, you have all kinds but it lacks coherence.
I love baseball ones (especially the one behind the catcher). the one with the guy riding his bike through times square (but without a post), the one with the windows (if you could see the actions of the people in each office it would be the bomb) and the rhode island (I think it's there, but it would be cool to frame vertically the Ferris wheel and the angel-boy). The rest
I like them a lot in general, but especially those made from the ground, with such a low point of view in such a high city. Perhaps by selecting only those you would be giving the exhibition a connecting link.
"NY. Level with the sky, level with the ground "
No. 2, 4, 6, 7, 8, 11, 12, 13, 14, 21, 24, 27, 28, 30
Well, if STRANGE LOPES is not bad at all to frame the Coney Island image (Ferris wheel) vertically. As for the building, it was a bit far and it doesn't have very good definition, but that's the idea, dark windows and people still working, it wouldn't be bad for an illustration.
As I said in the post, if it lacks a common link, I do not know if it is essential or not.
I think that each one of them can tell a story, in fact the idea was to accompany each of the photos with a text that would make us reflect on something. I'm on it.
But I totally agree with you, perhaps it is my lack of experience in this concept of exhibition that has made me ask for your advice, I take note. But what do you think of the idea of a reflective text about photos? the free interpretation of each one closes a lot, or it reinforces the image. What do you think?
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laGuarda
Buuuf, the thing is difficult Aaron! I personally really like the photo of Times Square (I think that's not it? ..) with the guy and the I love bags .. I think you have put some post but it has been very good. The skylines of super Bordaic buildings all, the photo of the woman looking up very good too, the eagle, the fair I like a lot too ... I don't know. All in general but these in particular for me are special.
Good luck with the expo and good work !!
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Thank you laGuarda. Your comments help me to see if the group is encouraged to comment a bit. Review. criticism I like criticism. If it is Time Square, I have put one without a post and another without. The one with the woman looking up goes a long way with this macro city, that you are looking up all the time, it is taken from the statue of liberty, so she has that curiosity. Thanks for encouraging you to comment. a greeting
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The set of illuminated windows and others in the dark seems very original to me; The cyclist with the bags and the woman looking up have reached me more than others ... and the one with the row of cars with the bridge at the back, although technically not the best for me, it gives me a very special vibe. .. They are all very good Aaron, you have it chungillo to make the selection ...
https://www.domestika.org/portfolios/mariet
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Indeed, the one with the bridge at the back is not very good technically, what happens is that I did it with a pretty bad camera the first day I arrived, then taking advantage of the fact that I was there, I bought a good machine. The thing is that I like the framing, I'll have to play with photoshop again to see if I get something better. Thank you
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I like many, but individually. Right now I think you should start making a selection of images since more than a personal work it seems a collective one, that is, you have all kinds but it lacks coherence.
Greetings and follow you !!!
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creativosinego
I have especially liked those in which there are people.
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Teacher PlusCompletely according to "GOR-D", the people.
I love baseball ones (especially the one behind the catcher). the one with the guy riding his bike through times square (but without a post), the one with the windows (if you could see the actions of the people in each office it would be the bomb) and the rhode island (I think it's there, but it would be cool to frame vertically the Ferris wheel and the angel-boy). The rest
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ModI like them a lot in general, but especially those made from the ground, with such a low point of view in such a high city. Perhaps by selecting only those you would be giving the exhibition a connecting link.
"NY. Level with the sky, level with the ground "
No. 2, 4, 6, 7, 8, 11, 12, 13, 14, 21, 24, 27, 28, 30
It's an idea. Congratulations on your photos.
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Well, if STRANGE LOPES is not bad at all to frame the Coney Island image (Ferris wheel) vertically. As for the building, it was a bit far and it doesn't have very good definition, but that's the idea, dark windows and people still working, it wouldn't be bad for an illustration.
As I said in the post, if it lacks a common link, I do not know if it is essential or not.
I think that each one of them can tell a story, in fact the idea was to accompany each of the photos with a text that would make us reflect on something. I'm on it.
But I totally agree with you, perhaps it is my lack of experience in this concept of exhibition that has made me ask for your advice, I take note. But what do you think of the idea of a reflective text about photos? the free interpretation of each one closes a lot, or it reinforces the image. What do you think?
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