Mi Proyecto del curso: Microtipografía: fundamentos de composición tipográfica

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• dkimura1

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  19.03.2020 at 16:56

  

  Hi @marialujanh98

  Nice job of typesetting. I see harmonious page proportions and margins, as well as good body / line ratio and clear differentiation between levels of information. The text blobs are very uniform and I see only a handful of composition details that would need to be adjusted:

  • Alleys in the second paragraph on p. 2 (left column), second paragraph p. 3 (right column) and last paragraph p. 4 (right column).
  • Give more irregularity to the right edge of the text justified to the left, in the author's profile. By the way, one digit is missing in the year of birth.
  • The indentation could be a bit more pronounced, perhaps the same value as the leading. The one you have now is not bad, this is just a suggestion.
  • On the cornices, try opening the prose a little. Maybe 75 units with the Tracking tool. This is also just a suggestion.

  Just out of curiosity, could you share with me the justify values you used in the main body text?

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• marialujanh98

  19.03.2020 at 20:14

  

  Hi @dkimura1 ! Thank you very much for the returns, the truth is I am very satisfied with the course. Yes, I'll give you the justified values: (The font is Cambo, in regular, 10/14)

  Word spacing:
  minimum: 85%
  optimal: 100%
  maximum: 133%

  Letter spacing:
  minimum: -3%
  optimal: 0%
  maximum: 3%

  Pictogram scale:
  All 100%

  Cheers!

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