Beautiful story, Oscar!
The technique is perfect because it immediately transmits the sympathetic message of the story and it reads very fluently.
Congratulations! I hope to see the book printed soon.
A hug to Mencia,
Teresa Mtz
Thanks Teresa,
I finally got it printed and it was a great gift for her birthday. Now he always wants me to read it to him at night 😅.
I'm already thinking of doing a second edition and I want to fix things like the treatment of the central character (Mencía), since now from a distance is when I see things to improve, as the character varies a lot from one page to another.
Thanks for everything, your course has been very inspiring!
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teresa_mtz
Teacher PlusBeautiful story, Oscar!
The technique is perfect because it immediately transmits the sympathetic message of the story and it reads very fluently.
Congratulations! I hope to see the book printed soon.
A hug to Mencia,
Teresa Mtz
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Thanks Teresa,
I finally got it printed and it was a great gift for her birthday. Now he always wants me to read it to him at night 😅.
I'm already thinking of doing a second edition and I want to fix things like the treatment of the central character (Mencía), since now from a distance is when I see things to improve, as the character varies a lot from one page to another.
Thanks for everything, your course has been very inspiring!
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