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Galletas de Jengibre.
by Jordi Calvera Solé @jordi_calvera
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Como se acercan fechas navideñas he decidido hacer algo representativo.
He utilizado un Foco lateral dirigido a una pared blanca para que rebote y así emular la luz de una ventana .
Estos son los parámetros que he utilizado:
f 7.1 1/160 ISO 160
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alkimia
Teacher PlusDear Jordi
What a marvel of series! I love the management of light and especially resources to generate the lighting style, very well resolved.
A few small comments (which are more in the sense of style):
Horizontal photography, the column of cookies has little prominence, I think that's why you switched to vertical format. In that same shot, the red caps on the milk bottles are very distracting.
In the second photograph, the composition is good, I feel that as a photo it is resolved in an editorial manner, that is, that you leave a lot of neutral space for a title to be placed and perhaps the cookie recipe, it works perfectly that way.
The last photograph is the one that I liked the most in the composition of the tower, only that the tall green pine is barely noticeable and if we only saw this image it is not clear what that colored spot that is in the background is, the same thing happens with the spool of thread on the right, it just barely enters the shot and is distracting. I think taking the shots closer to the product can help you a lot. Again the neutral space is very large, if it is for a communication that will have a text, it works perfect, but if it is for something else like social networks, a cut would not hurt.
Thanks for sharing and I am very happy to see the result, I hope to continue seeing more of your work here in the forum.
Greetings and congratulations!
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