The choice of the elements seems right to me, also the quality of these. The problem I see is that they are all the same size and therefore the same hierarchy.
As the typography is very heavy, a main element in the illustration is needed that makes us fix our eyes and gives us a clearer clue of what the text is about.
On the other hand it is very evident that the "explosion / smoke" on the inside right is not in black and white. It is perceived as a mistake since you made the decision to use everything else in black and white.
Thank you very much for the feedback Israel. Now that I have more time I have been able to resume the course again and correct errors, go back to review the course and refresh content. One of the best courses I have done at Doméstika. I love your jobs.
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israelgevargas
Teacher PlusHi Estefania
The choice of the elements seems right to me, also the quality of these. The problem I see is that they are all the same size and therefore the same hierarchy.
As the typography is very heavy, a main element in the illustration is needed that makes us fix our eyes and gives us a clearer clue of what the text is about.
On the other hand it is very evident that the "explosion / smoke" on the inside right is not in black and white. It is perceived as a mistake since you made the decision to use everything else in black and white.
Greetings, we keep in touch.
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Thank you very much for the feedback Israel. Now that I have more time I have been able to resume the course again and correct errors, go back to review the course and refresh content. One of the best courses I have done at Doméstika. I love your jobs.
A greeting.
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