It was very good, congratulations!
I would just give you a couple of suggestions to improve it.
In the first scene of the cat's head after it falls asleep it would no longer make it wake up so that it is understood that they sleep a lot.
And the following text would change it to "and 15% of the day grooming" because if not your copy is read:
"Cats spend 70% of the day sleeping. 15% grooming"
and lose some of the meaning.
I hope you liked the course and get more animated projects :)
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yimbo8
Teacher PlusIt was very good, congratulations!
I would just give you a couple of suggestions to improve it.
In the first scene of the cat's head after it falls asleep it would no longer make it wake up so that it is understood that they sleep a lot.
And the following text would change it to "and 15% of the day grooming" because if not your copy is read:
"Cats spend 70% of the day sleeping. 15% grooming"
and lose some of the meaning.
I hope you liked the course and get more animated projects :)
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paula_arranz
Fixed up!
Thank you very much, I really enjoyed the course
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