You achieved a very cute sunflower illustration, it would be good if you took advantage of the whole flower to integrate it into all your stationery pieces. The part of the typography is very weak compared to the illustration and even more so of that imposing flower that is the sunflower, I recommend you use a typeface with more personality in addition to integrating it into the composition, in the agenda the text is very tight to the upper edge, you could lower the illustration 5 centimeters and give space to "Agenda 2019" your signature could also integrate it in the cleanest spaces to achieve better readability even use white so that it is not lost.
I hope my observations serve you. Thanks for sharing your final project with us!
@pau_maciel totally! I didn't know how to do that integration. I'll keep trying digitally to see what I can achieve and I'll show you 😊💖 thank you very much.
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pau_maciel
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You achieved a very cute sunflower illustration, it would be good if you took advantage of the whole flower to integrate it into all your stationery pieces. The part of the typography is very weak compared to the illustration and even more so of that imposing flower that is the sunflower, I recommend you use a typeface with more personality in addition to integrating it into the composition, in the agenda the text is very tight to the upper edge, you could lower the illustration 5 centimeters and give space to "Agenda 2019" your signature could also integrate it in the cleanest spaces to achieve better readability even use white so that it is not lost.
I hope my observations serve you. Thanks for sharing your final project with us!
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@pau_maciel totally! I didn't know how to do that integration. I'll keep trying digitally to see what I can achieve and I'll show you 😊💖 thank you very much.
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