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Mi Proyecto del curso: Concept Art: introducción al diseño de escenarios
by Freddy Navarro @frydark_zz
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Buaaa, me ha encantado el curso!!!, aunque me ha sabido a poco....estoy deseando que se haga un segundo curso para seguir mejorando, aún no estoy contento con mi proyecto , pero lo subo, quizas haga otro...
esto es un concept de mi proyecto, "Detective Misterio", novela grafica que voy haciendo poco a poco y que, porque no, tambien me gustaria hacer un video juego. Un saludo
PD: por cierto, agradeceré todo comentario o critica constructiva, muchas gracias de antemano, un saludooo!!!
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josefomalatrova
very cool and atmospheric
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frydark_zz
@josefomalatrova thank you very much !!!
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wisdomofthefool
Hello, I was struck by the contrast of colors with the silhouette of the character, the idea of your concept has a lot of potential, but I think you can still improve a lot of things. Here are some details for you to check:) ... I quite like the close-up, it would be convenient to add some light details to the character as you did with the other elements. From the perspective it seems that the sea is over the buildings and not in the distance, so I would advise you to darken the sea and divide it from the buildings with a lighter color (for atmospheric perspective) ... The detail you handled in the purple building on the right, add it to all the others for a little more variety. The moonlight is excessive, of course the moon has a halo of light but attenuating it would be, as well as darkening the sky in general would help. Checking many references of these types of scenarios (more if they are from real photographs) that helps a lot ... I hope my comment helps you a little, although you have done it for a long time, you have already improved it :)
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frydark_zz
@wisdomofthefool Thank you very much, right now I have it parked, but I really appreciate your comment when I have more time I will retouch it, I think that the contributions you tell me would really enrich.
really thank you very much x comment.
A greeting!!!
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