The videos were very good :)
I would only make some recommendations to improve them.
In the second video, I think everything is going very well, it has a good rhythm, I just think it lacks a closure that finishes telling the story of the trip.
In the first video I think you have to give more time to read the texts on the timeline or see how to give the same information with less texts.
Finally I think that in the final scene of your character the gag should have to do with the heat since you are talking about global warming, maybe he is working but all sweaty and with a fan in front of him or something like that.
I hope you liked the course and it helps you to continue encouraging :)
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yimbo8
Teacher PlusThe videos were very good :)
I would only make some recommendations to improve them.
In the second video, I think everything is going very well, it has a good rhythm, I just think it lacks a closure that finishes telling the story of the trip.
In the first video I think you have to give more time to read the texts on the timeline or see how to give the same information with less texts.
Finally I think that in the final scene of your character the gag should have to do with the heat since you are talking about global warming, maybe he is working but all sweaty and with a fan in front of him or something like that.
I hope you liked the course and it helps you to continue encouraging :)
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diegomediapro
@yimbo8 thanks if you're right I'll keep it in mind for the next
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