I find your poster beautiful and it is almost perfect. I have only found two small glitches that we can discuss:
Wouldn't it be From Australia to India, passing through Barcelona , with a capital letter?
« […]of rabid news is From Australia to India, passing through Barcelona […]»
And another small detail: wouldn't it be more correct devised and organized by [y no para]It Dansa ?
Hello, I am thinking of doing the course and I went through this post. I want to make a query: Why put the colon (:) and the comma (,) that remain as "hanging" at the end of the lines, if it can be solved only with the game of typography and scores? I think of it as the titles on book covers, that you don't necessarily have to put the point to separate the title from the subtitle. Even, I ask, would in this case fit the graphic license to place "Australia ..." in low all (if in the end it is correctly written as below)? Obviously it would depend on the graphic style more than everything of the poster. This one is more classic and formal, so to speak. The latter of the lower case is difficult for me because I am an editor, but I ask if it could be an option. Thank you.
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Lalolagráfica
Teacher PlusHi @carolinaamell :
I find your poster beautiful and it is almost perfect. I have only found two small glitches that we can discuss:
Wouldn't it be From Australia to India, passing through Barcelona , with a capital letter?
« […]of rabid news is From Australia to India, passing through Barcelona […]»
And another small detail: wouldn't it be more correct devised and organized by [y no para]It Dansa ?
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amellcarolina
Hello @lalolagrafica :
Thank you very much for your corrections !!!!
And thank you very much for the course, it has been very enjoyable and useful.
Thank you,
Carolina
PS: Corrections made ^ _ ^
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edicionesmil
Hello, I am thinking of doing the course and I went through this post. I want to make a query: Why put the colon (:) and the comma (,) that remain as "hanging" at the end of the lines, if it can be solved only with the game of typography and scores? I think of it as the titles on book covers, that you don't necessarily have to put the point to separate the title from the subtitle. Even, I ask, would in this case fit the graphic license to place "Australia ..." in low all (if in the end it is correctly written as below)? Obviously it would depend on the graphic style more than everything of the poster. This one is more classic and formal, so to speak. The latter of the lower case is difficult for me because I am an editor, but I ask if it could be an option. Thank you.
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