From the first session, the most evocative photo is the second, where the references you indicated in the preparation are well reflected. However, the two brightest photos break so much that they almost look like two different women, with different inner worlds.
From the outdoor session it seems to me that the odd photos reflect well the image of a strong woman you were saying (the third is my favorite), while the even ones are too romantic.
Taking all this into account, I would invite you to work especially on the narrative part, find as an emotional center, a state of mind that you want to transmit and make an effort to hold on to it in each shot even if many options are opened each time, so your photos will count. increasingly powerful stories.
If you do more similar projects, do not hesitate to share them here!
@lupedelavallina
Hi Lupe.
Thanks for your words. I wanted to try to show two very different worlds, but as I said, with the feminine force and perhaps the narrative line developed by itself while doing what it could. Your guide and your comments will serve me well for the future, so I will keep that in mind.
This course has renewed my photographic spirit.
Thank you so much for everything.
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lupedelavallina
Teacher PlusHello Gema! Thanks for sending the project.
From the first session, the most evocative photo is the second, where the references you indicated in the preparation are well reflected. However, the two brightest photos break so much that they almost look like two different women, with different inner worlds.
From the outdoor session it seems to me that the odd photos reflect well the image of a strong woman you were saying (the third is my favorite), while the even ones are too romantic.
Taking all this into account, I would invite you to work especially on the narrative part, find as an emotional center, a state of mind that you want to transmit and make an effort to hold on to it in each shot even if many options are opened each time, so your photos will count. increasingly powerful stories.
If you do more similar projects, do not hesitate to share them here!
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@lupedelavallina
Hi Lupe.
Thanks for your words. I wanted to try to show two very different worlds, but as I said, with the feminine force and perhaps the narrative line developed by itself while doing what it could. Your guide and your comments will serve me well for the future, so I will keep that in mind.
This course has renewed my photographic spirit.
Thank you so much for everything.
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