Great July! I really like the color gradation of the composition! My only feedback would be that the fire looks a bit fake, this is because it looks dull and lifeless, especially the one in the back! If you use that same layer as Screen on top of the fire it can help you accentuate the luminance effect! However very good in everything! I like the drama of the image! Cheers!
I agree with Mario ... Only the part of the fire and I would paint even more reflection of red light on the body ... The front quite a lot, since the flame is right there .. And also on the back and the arm of the sword . Because of the torch behind it .. And the dodge and burn, do it taking into account the light emitted by the torch ..
An example, do you see in the abdomen on the bottom right how the light comes from the right side and the shadow from the left side?
In real life it was the other way around, the brightness was on the left side and the shadow on the right side ... The inconsistency in the leftovers is one of the things that quickly gives away the montages ... I see that you have a lot of talent, for which I recommend you to pass tutorials on lights and shadows .. And remember also the consistency in the color of the light .. For example, do you see the smoke to the right of the abdomen as it has white light? Just ask yourself where is that white light coming from?
Hopefully this helps you improve even more .. Good job
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mario_olvera
Teacher PlusGreat July! I really like the color gradation of the composition! My only feedback would be that the fire looks a bit fake, this is because it looks dull and lifeless, especially the one in the back! If you use that same layer as Screen on top of the fire it can help you accentuate the luminance effect! However very good in everything! I like the drama of the image! Cheers!
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I agree with Mario ... Only the part of the fire and I would paint even more reflection of red light on the body ... The front quite a lot, since the flame is right there .. And also on the back and the arm of the sword . Because of the torch behind it .. And the dodge and burn, do it taking into account the light emitted by the torch ..
An example, do you see in the abdomen on the bottom right how the light comes from the right side and the shadow from the left side?
In real life it was the other way around, the brightness was on the left side and the shadow on the right side ... The inconsistency in the leftovers is one of the things that quickly gives away the montages ... I see that you have a lot of talent, for which I recommend you to pass tutorials on lights and shadows .. And remember also the consistency in the color of the light .. For example, do you see the smoke to the right of the abdomen as it has white light? Just ask yourself where is that white light coming from?
Hopefully this helps you improve even more .. Good job
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