First of all, sorry for answering so late. It also seems a bit insufficient to me. I think you should write more text and take more risks ... I see little punctuation and your use of a distinctive type is a bit too short for me. I really like the use of the bracket with a clear intention, I think you should go a little more along that line. I see two things that are not right, yes.
1. The spaces on both sides of the midpoint, which are different.
2. The hour symbol must be separated by an unbreakable space from the figure.
![Presentación libro [in]visibles -1](https://cdn.domestika.org/c_fill,dpr_auto,f_auto,q_auto/v1516374181/content-items/002/224/087/presentaciones-febrero-2018-02-original.jpg?1516374181)
![[in]visibles, el libro de las pequeñas grandes historias que están cambiando el mundo.. Editorial Design project by Charo Moreno Pardo - 11.24.2017](https://cdn.domestika.org/c_fill,dpr_2.0,f_auto,h_220,pg_1,t_base_params,w_220/v1516292559/project-covers/000/381/894/381894-original.jpg?1516292559)
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charomorenopardo
Hello everyone,
The simplicity of the content has prevented me from working on the points suggested in the course ... Any suggestions to give more life to the poster?
Thanks a lot,
Charo
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Lalolagráfica
Teacher PlusHi @charomorenopardo :
First of all, sorry for answering so late. It also seems a bit insufficient to me. I think you should write more text and take more risks ... I see little punctuation and your use of a distinctive type is a bit too short for me. I really like the use of the bracket with a clear intention, I think you should go a little more along that line. I see two things that are not right, yes.
1. The spaces on both sides of the midpoint, which are different.
2. The hour symbol must be separated by an unbreakable space from the figure.
Cheers!
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