Hi @sinsuni
Let me make some comments about the project:
1. It would help a lot to visualize the proportions of the pages. You can draw a thin line around the leaves and back. Another alternative is to make the pages a very light gray color.
2. Although the visualization of the project is in low resolution, it seems to me that the prose must be adjusted between the letters that make up the title. Now there is a lot of space around the "T" in "AGATA" and "WRITER" also looks a bit uneven, with a lot of space between the "T" and the "O", while in relation to the whole word, it feels pressed the combination "CRI". You can also open "OR".
3. Pacing the right edges of text boxes needs more work. Several bellies and diagonals are visible. This takes time and several attempts. The amount of "white" on this border is at the minimum necessary.
4. Take care of details like the thief line in the first paragraph on page 124.
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dkimura1
Teacher PlusHi @sinsuni
Let me make some comments about the project:
1. It would help a lot to visualize the proportions of the pages. You can draw a thin line around the leaves and back. Another alternative is to make the pages a very light gray color.
2. Although the visualization of the project is in low resolution, it seems to me that the prose must be adjusted between the letters that make up the title. Now there is a lot of space around the "T" in "AGATA" and "WRITER" also looks a bit uneven, with a lot of space between the "T" and the "O", while in relation to the whole word, it feels pressed the combination "CRI". You can also open "OR".
3. Pacing the right edges of text boxes needs more work. Several bellies and diagonals are visible. This takes time and several attempts. The amount of "white" on this border is at the minimum necessary.
4. Take care of details like the thief line in the first paragraph on page 124.
Cheers!
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