Hi Fredo, I see that you have tried to link the photos by title. That seems like a good strategy to me. In photos 1, 2, 4 and 5 you show what is happening on the street, while 3, 6, 7, 8 and 9 you focus more on architecture. I think the work is well on the way towards explaining the history of your journey on that May day, perhaps it could be intensified more to better tie the story behind some good images. A greeting!
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Teacher PlusHi Fredo, I see that you have tried to link the photos by title. That seems like a good strategy to me. In photos 1, 2, 4 and 5 you show what is happening on the street, while 3, 6, 7, 8 and 9 you focus more on architecture. I think the work is well on the way towards explaining the history of your journey on that May day, perhaps it could be intensified more to better tie the story behind some good images. A greeting!
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