Good job @clapulido ! You have even thought about the reflection of the birds in the water! I see some little things you could do to help the image.
- There is a tree on the left that looks very green, it could be desaturated and that takes a bit of the tonality of those in the background.
- The stone in the foreground is fine, however it could give a more bluish and not so yellowish touch, in this way you will simulate the reflection of the sky in it.
Thank you Phrame team, this course has been a great and enriching experience, along with the informational baggage that you have provided us. I really appreciate your feedback and I hope you will produce a new course to venture back together.
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clapulido
Hello, I hope you like this render, I would like to receive criticism and suggestions to help me improve. A hug.
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Teacher PlusGood job @clapulido ! You have even thought about the reflection of the birds in the water! I see some little things you could do to help the image.
- There is a tree on the left that looks very green, it could be desaturated and that takes a bit of the tonality of those in the background.
- The stone in the foreground is fine, however it could give a more bluish and not so yellowish touch, in this way you will simulate the reflection of the sky in it.
Cheers!
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Thank you Phrame team, this course has been a great and enriching experience, along with the informational baggage that you have provided us. I really appreciate your feedback and I hope you will produce a new course to venture back together.
A big hug.
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