Very good, Susana. You have put more references than I would have put but I see a good balance. Perhaps he would have separated the bird from the head. Nor do all the elements need to touch to make them appear integrated.
And regarding the line, I would have refined the line a bit in some parts so as not to mark some wrinkles so much.
Cheers!
@oscargimenez I know about the references! but I couldn't resist ... I also realize that it is more "pictorial" than "graphic", so to speak, but I didn't know how to tell the story in another way.
Regarding the line, I am going to do it, because I also saw very strange wrinkles.
You don't know the turns I gave the bird ... I wanted it to be the link between the two characters, Berger's metaphor about Darwish; that's why I put it closer to his head, but I'll try again.
The shadows, even if you don't say it, are my weak point ... I want to work more on the face, but I was excited to show it now, I've been with him for a while and it's a way to give him an "end", because if not, never I would finish it! Thank you very much again, it has been a great pleasure doing this course with you.
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oscargimenez
Staff PlusVery good, Susana. You have put more references than I would have put but I see a good balance. Perhaps he would have separated the bird from the head. Nor do all the elements need to touch to make them appear integrated.
And regarding the line, I would have refined the line a bit in some parts so as not to mark some wrinkles so much.
Cheers!
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Plus@oscargimenez I know about the references! but I couldn't resist ... I also realize that it is more "pictorial" than "graphic", so to speak, but I didn't know how to tell the story in another way.
Regarding the line, I am going to do it, because I also saw very strange wrinkles.
You don't know the turns I gave the bird ... I wanted it to be the link between the two characters, Berger's metaphor about Darwish; that's why I put it closer to his head, but I'll try again.
The shadows, even if you don't say it, are my weak point ... I want to work more on the face, but I was excited to show it now, I've been with him for a while and it's a way to give him an "end", because if not, never I would finish it! Thank you very much again, it has been a great pleasure doing this course with you.
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