Hello! The idea is very good, but the elements stick to you. Separate the background making it a little lighter, not so black. On the other hand, the scale in some elements is wrong, the piano for example, compared to the character and the armchair would be too small. These changes are worth making, it will improve a lot!
@painter2115 the composition is really cool! It will be powerful!
One piece of advice, I would darken the eagle-character, since the light comes from behind him. That the main silhouette and that of the parts exposed to the rear light (knees, shoe tip, right hand, etc.) be sensed. And the dark head so that the light of the eyes and the outlining of the feathers with the backlight stand out more ... it can be great (in my humble opinion eh ..).
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painter2115
My Final Project ..... I hope to have any comments ... Carlos Marsal.
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Teacher PlusHello! The idea is very good, but the elements stick to you. Separate the background making it a little lighter, not so black. On the other hand, the scale in some elements is wrong, the piano for example, compared to the character and the armchair would be too small. These changes are worth making, it will improve a lot!
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@painter2115 the composition is really cool! It will be powerful!
One piece of advice, I would darken the eagle-character, since the light comes from behind him. That the main silhouette and that of the parts exposed to the rear light (knees, shoe tip, right hand, etc.) be sensed. And the dark head so that the light of the eyes and the outlining of the feathers with the backlight stand out more ... it can be great (in my humble opinion eh ..).
A greeting ;)
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painter2115
ok ... very well I will take into account all your advice and put them into practice ... so let's get to work ... thanks
Good day...
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painter2115
Ready! I have made the suggested changes ..... I think that if I look much better and I am satisfied with the result .....
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