@cactusverdementa Thank you very much! I did not want to load it with the plot, but I will definitely use it in others that I do because I am left with the desire!
@anagalvan Thanks to you, love this course! I did not know Manga at all and it is a one way road ... you were very clear in each lesson and what you proposed as triggers for ideas helped me a lot ... I never did any comics because I wanted THE idea, but something as simple as the What I do left me super happy and wanting more and more to improve!
Thanks for everything, a pleasure to see you work
It's very good, I really like it. Maintains narrative tension all the time.
Just one thing. For my taste, the text is unnecessary, I would change it for an image of the phone in the ear or something like that. I say this because I believe that the text does not contribute anything that is not understood or perceived only with the image. For my taste, the text should contribute things that are not understood or over-understood, providing necessary data. I find it very nice how you tell the story only with small fragments of the image using the closed plane above all, and I think that the text vignette breaks that game and that rhythm that you have created a bit.
It is just a detail and an opinion that I hope will bring you something. But the important thing is that I really liked it.
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cactusverdementa
I like it very much, the line, the colors and the plot have left me .. what happened ?!
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Ana Galvañ
Teacher Plus@mariwasi Very nice as a whole, and the cover is ideal
Thank you for participating in this course, I hope you continue to tell such great stories. A hug and good luck!
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mariwasi
@cactusverdementa Thank you very much! I did not want to load it with the plot, but I will definitely use it in others that I do because I am left with the desire!
@anagalvan Thanks to you, love this course! I did not know Manga at all and it is a one way road ... you were very clear in each lesson and what you proposed as triggers for ideas helped me a lot ... I never did any comics because I wanted THE idea, but something as simple as the What I do left me super happy and wanting more and more to improve!
Thanks for everything, a pleasure to see you work
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Yago Torres
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It's very good, I really like it. Maintains narrative tension all the time.
Just one thing. For my taste, the text is unnecessary, I would change it for an image of the phone in the ear or something like that. I say this because I believe that the text does not contribute anything that is not understood or perceived only with the image. For my taste, the text should contribute things that are not understood or over-understood, providing necessary data. I find it very nice how you tell the story only with small fragments of the image using the closed plane above all, and I think that the text vignette breaks that game and that rhythm that you have created a bit.
It is just a detail and an opinion that I hope will bring you something. But the important thing is that I really liked it.
A greeting.
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