Very dynamic and intricate your design. The ornaments fill the envelope well and it looks very strong. I have some comments:
—The shapes of the capital letters are not very legible. Perhaps it is not a priority, since in the identity you put your full name, which makes it unnecessary to read the monogram very clearly. But check this point.
—There are several parallel movements in the shafts of the initials. It is very important to take care of and regularize the internal blank space within these three forms. It shows a lot when they are not uniform.
—The terminals of the ornamental curves such as 'leaves' could be more varied and better polished and detailed, especially in how they come out of the thick lines of the letters. I think the curves could start from these lines in a more continuous and integrated way.
—The upper horizontal strokes dominate a lot and are thicker than the vertical ones. This throws the lyrics a bit off balance. I suggest thickening the vertical strokes.
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meave
Teacher PlusVery dynamic and intricate your design. The ornaments fill the envelope well and it looks very strong. I have some comments:
—The shapes of the capital letters are not very legible. Perhaps it is not a priority, since in the identity you put your full name, which makes it unnecessary to read the monogram very clearly. But check this point.
—There are several parallel movements in the shafts of the initials. It is very important to take care of and regularize the internal blank space within these three forms. It shows a lot when they are not uniform.
—The terminals of the ornamental curves such as 'leaves' could be more varied and better polished and detailed, especially in how they come out of the thick lines of the letters. I think the curves could start from these lines in a more continuous and integrated way.
—The upper horizontal strokes dominate a lot and are thicker than the vertical ones. This throws the lyrics a bit off balance. I suggest thickening the vertical strokes.
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g2eduardok
@meave Thank you very much for the comments, I hope in these days to better refine the design taking into account your comments.
I really liked the course, greetings!
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meave
Teacher PlusThanks Eduardo. Nice to see what you have produced with the topics and techniques of the course. I appreciate your comment. Cheers!
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birpip
Elegant
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roxananunezkamargo
Distinguished.
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