Well, this is my final project ... I have colored it by hand and I have scanned it, that is why the colors are not appreciated well ...... and it is already bound (manually, too) ready to be given away the day after tomorrow .... I await the teacher's comments and his professional vision ....
Hello ..... Miguel, I would have liked you to give me your opinion as a teacher about my comic ....... here I say goodbye to all of you, for my part, I end the course, a very cordial greeting! !!!!!
Hi Eva, I was a bit disconnected. The story seems great to me. It would be good if you label it with your handwriting and not with a type, capital letters, large and legible. Be careful with the washes that reproduce poorly, flat and soft colors would be better.
The black bullet on the last page is not well understood, the letter has to be white and a little thicker.
Generally that color that you use for backgrounds sometimes: doors, road ... is very dark. You can't put a character with black hair against such a dark background because it sticks, and panel 5 on the first page is all too dark, you hardly see anything, you have to make a couple of color shots and prioritize what it's in front.
For the rest, the story is clearly explained and everyone can read it, that's what matters!
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eva
Well, this is my final project ... I have colored it by hand and I have scanned it, that is why the colors are not appreciated well ...... and it is already bound (manually, too) ready to be given away the day after tomorrow .... I await the teacher's comments and his professional vision ....
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Hello ..... Miguel, I would have liked you to give me your opinion as a teacher about my comic ....... here I say goodbye to all of you, for my part, I end the course, a very cordial greeting! !!!!!
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Teacher PlusHi Eva, I was a bit disconnected. The story seems great to me. It would be good if you label it with your handwriting and not with a type, capital letters, large and legible. Be careful with the washes that reproduce poorly, flat and soft colors would be better.
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Thank you very much, Miguel !!! It has been a great experience doing this course, greetings
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Teacher PlusThe black bullet on the last page is not well understood, the letter has to be white and a little thicker.
Generally that color that you use for backgrounds sometimes: doors, road ... is very dark. You can't put a character with black hair against such a dark background because it sticks, and panel 5 on the first page is all too dark, you hardly see anything, you have to make a couple of color shots and prioritize what it's in front.
For the rest, the story is clearly explained and everyone can read it, that's what matters!
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