The photos do not look bad, you exploit well the resources you have of lighting and stage, although they limp in post-production:
The skins are over-retouched, there are hardly any pores and the abuse of smoothing is noticeable. You have to be very careful with the treatment of the skins, because if we go too far we can take on all the work.
The color only by areas is something that I do not like too much, on the cover I would opt for pure black and white or color. Are shoes really so important to put them in color? Don't you think they detract from the character's gaze, what is really important?
Be careful with the selections that in the laces are very strong whites that are surely the result of some quick selection. In any case, that would remove it because it messes up the image.
Also beware of whitening your eyes too much!
The rest I see well, just be careful with the postpo, because in the end it is damaging the final result.
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jorge_alvarino
Teacher PlusHi @Ardo
The photos do not look bad, you exploit well the resources you have of lighting and stage, although they limp in post-production:
The skins are over-retouched, there are hardly any pores and the abuse of smoothing is noticeable. You have to be very careful with the treatment of the skins, because if we go too far we can take on all the work.
The color only by areas is something that I do not like too much, on the cover I would opt for pure black and white or color. Are shoes really so important to put them in color? Don't you think they detract from the character's gaze, what is really important?
Be careful with the selections that in the laces are very strong whites that are surely the result of some quick selection. In any case, that would remove it because it messes up the image.
Also beware of whitening your eyes too much!
The rest I see well, just be careful with the postpo, because in the end it is damaging the final result.
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msk
Thank you very much for the comment, mister teacher @jalvarinophoto . I have learned a lot with the course. Thanks for the tips of the skins
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