Hello Adriana,
Congratulations on completing the course and thanks for sharing your final project with the community.
In the first image, the sunset lighting is captured beautifully, giving the scene a warm, golden glow that enhances the atmosphere. The composition, while aesthetically pleasing, could be improved by making the railing and the rooftop lines lead more strongly into the image, guiding the viewer’s eye through the frame. The tree branch at the top creates a nice framing element, but it may benefit from sharper focus to add texture and contrast to the otherwise soft lighting. A slight adjustment to the exposure and sharpness would help enhance the details and make the image more vivid overall.
In the second image, the photograph of the moon is well-framed and showcases a solid grasp of exposure, as the moon is sharply detailed against a clear sky. However, the composition could benefit from more dynamic framing, perhaps incorporating more of the surrounding sky or landscape to provide context and visual interest. Alternatively, zooming in further on the moon could enhance the level of detail in the texture of its surface. The image also appears slightly underexposed overall, which may diminish some of the visual impact, particularly in terms of highlighting the moon’s brightness against the sky.
Thanks again for sharing your project.
Best of luck,
Giulia
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giulia_candussi
Teacher PlusHello Adriana,
Congratulations on completing the course and thanks for sharing your final project with the community.
In the first image, the sunset lighting is captured beautifully, giving the scene a warm, golden glow that enhances the atmosphere. The composition, while aesthetically pleasing, could be improved by making the railing and the rooftop lines lead more strongly into the image, guiding the viewer’s eye through the frame. The tree branch at the top creates a nice framing element, but it may benefit from sharper focus to add texture and contrast to the otherwise soft lighting. A slight adjustment to the exposure and sharpness would help enhance the details and make the image more vivid overall.
In the second image, the photograph of the moon is well-framed and showcases a solid grasp of exposure, as the moon is sharply detailed against a clear sky. However, the composition could benefit from more dynamic framing, perhaps incorporating more of the surrounding sky or landscape to provide context and visual interest. Alternatively, zooming in further on the moon could enhance the level of detail in the texture of its surface. The image also appears slightly underexposed overall, which may diminish some of the visual impact, particularly in terms of highlighting the moon’s brightness against the sky.
Thanks again for sharing your project.
Best of luck,
Giulia
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