Work is fine. I would only point out that the logo animations are a bit strange, on the one hand there are movements that are very mechanical (it is a matter of speed curves) and there are other movements that are a bit free. Maybe you could simplify them a bit. Another thing I see is that the stationery representation on the final poster (which comes out on video) should be static.
What I understand is that the dynamic or flexible part of the logo is not so much in the movements of the letters but in the curves of the background and different colors that are shown in the cards at the beginning, is that correct? This is not entirely clear in your presentation, that would polish it a bit, if you need help, write me in the course forum and we will work on it;)
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microbians
StaffWork is fine. I would only point out that the logo animations are a bit strange, on the one hand there are movements that are very mechanical (it is a matter of speed curves) and there are other movements that are a bit free. Maybe you could simplify them a bit. Another thing I see is that the stationery representation on the final poster (which comes out on video) should be static.
What I understand is that the dynamic or flexible part of the logo is not so much in the movements of the letters but in the curves of the background and different colors that are shown in the cards at the beginning, is that correct? This is not entirely clear in your presentation, that would polish it a bit, if you need help, write me in the course forum and we will work on it;)
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sheeldon55
Hello!
Sorry for being late, I was busy with work.
Exactly the dynamic part is the background, I would be very pleased if you could support me with polishing it.
Thank you!
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