Hello Pilar!
We see the intent, but overall it is not working as it should.
On the one hand there is a problem of typographic choice and on the other an aesthetic theme that mixes too many speeches at the same time making everything look little worked.
The first thing is that the concept is not reflected anywhere. We don't remember, but have you already done the exercise of thinking of an idea to support the whole speech? If so, will you tell us again?
Ok, but if you can, better do everything through the forum, because if you continue to have it here we will not receive notifications when you upload more things.
Anyway, we would like to talk to you about the concept, because the crux of the matter is there.
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relajaelcoco
Teacher PlusHello Pilar!
We see the intent, but overall it is not working as it should.
On the one hand there is a problem of typographic choice and on the other an aesthetic theme that mixes too many speeches at the same time making everything look little worked.
The first thing is that the concept is not reflected anywhere. We don't remember, but have you already done the exercise of thinking of an idea to support the whole speech? If so, will you tell us again?
Thanks a lot
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pilarsanzsanchez
Hello! Thank you very much for the comment ... I'll keep working and I'll tell you.
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relajaelcoco
Teacher PlusOk, but if you can, better do everything through the forum, because if you continue to have it here we will not receive notifications when you upload more things.
Anyway, we would like to talk to you about the concept, because the crux of the matter is there.
A hug and happy weekend
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