The color palette works nicely, also the composition is balanced.
Perhaps I would have moved the cat to the left a bit more and adjusted the cats anatomy to follow the diagonal lines a bit more, so it would look a bit more abstract and part of the mural, now it looks a little bit stickered on the wall. Also you could have laid the tile pattern over the cat with multiply effect so it would look more painted on the wall.
The sketch had some lines and texture on the floor, I think they could look great in the final too.
Thanks for sharing your work and taking the course!
@studioposti Thank you so much for the comment, I didn't expect it.
I was rushing to finishing because of the certificate, which in the end I didn't get. xD
Now I can continue modifying the illustration adding more texture and applying your suggestions.
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studioposti
Teacher PlusThe color palette works nicely, also the composition is balanced.
Perhaps I would have moved the cat to the left a bit more and adjusted the cats anatomy to follow the diagonal lines a bit more, so it would look a bit more abstract and part of the mural, now it looks a little bit stickered on the wall. Also you could have laid the tile pattern over the cat with multiply effect so it would look more painted on the wall.
The sketch had some lines and texture on the floor, I think they could look great in the final too.
Thanks for sharing your work and taking the course!
kristinapuvaca7
@studioposti Thank you so much for the comment, I didn't expect it.
I was rushing to finishing because of the certificate, which in the end I didn't get. xD
Now I can continue modifying the illustration adding more texture and applying your suggestions.
Thanks again, I really enjoyed it fully! ♡
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