Hi @neusyaskew
Very good work, congratulations! it's very good! The idea is very original and the composition and retouching are very cool. I'll give you some comments (as always they are only suggestions for improvement);
- the image you have used as the background looks pixelated (I suppose it lacks resolution). It would be great if you can get the image at a higher resolution (or a similar one), because the difference between the image of the girl and the background is very noticeable.
- Hair and jewelry trimming is fine. It would be nice to soften the edge of the model's right arm a bit (it looks like a dark edge). This can be easily fixed by using a layer mask and a black brush with a lot of zoom.
- I like the retouching of the face like that in a futuristic way.
- If in the end you use the same background, I would "lower" it a little position to lose a little more ground for a perspective issue. I get the impression that the girl is shot with a lens that is "longer" than the background (which looks very angular).
nice job! Let's see if you do more and so we are commenting on them!
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NeusyAskew
@peterporta I would love to know your opinion about my work. I have loved the course and I have learned a lot !!! Thank you!!!!
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Teacher PlusHi @neusyaskew
Very good work, congratulations! it's very good! The idea is very original and the composition and retouching are very cool. I'll give you some comments (as always they are only suggestions for improvement);
- the image you have used as the background looks pixelated (I suppose it lacks resolution). It would be great if you can get the image at a higher resolution (or a similar one), because the difference between the image of the girl and the background is very noticeable.
- Hair and jewelry trimming is fine. It would be nice to soften the edge of the model's right arm a bit (it looks like a dark edge). This can be easily fixed by using a layer mask and a black brush with a lot of zoom.
- I like the retouching of the face like that in a futuristic way.
- If in the end you use the same background, I would "lower" it a little position to lose a little more ground for a perspective issue. I get the impression that the girl is shot with a lens that is "longer" than the background (which looks very angular).
nice job! Let's see if you do more and so we are commenting on them!
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NeusyAskew
Thanks a lot! Whoever has a moment fix it ^^
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