Thank you very much for being part of this course and congratulations on getting here! You can see a good effort in your project, especially in the variety of applications and brand extension elements.
There are a few points that we can highlight as areas for improvement:
- We love that you use the color palette of the Ethiopian flag, however we don't think it should be taken so literally. One idea would be not to use the specific colors of the flag, but to adapt or take them as a reference, whether they are more opaque, lighter or darker colors.
- Very good effort in the variety of graphics that you present! however there are some that are not perceived in the same style as everything else. In general, there is a lack of cohesion between the elements of the brand.
- The illustrations you used on the bag are the best part of your project! They should be reflected in other parts of the brand.
- The reason for the accent in the logo is confusing, what does it represent? It is not clear what it is used for and the reason behind its color changes.
Thank you again for sharing your talent with us!
We wish you much success! 🙌🏻
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Teacher PlusHi Juan Pablo,
Thank you very much for being part of this course and congratulations on getting here! You can see a good effort in your project, especially in the variety of applications and brand extension elements.
There are a few points that we can highlight as areas for improvement:
- We love that you use the color palette of the Ethiopian flag, however we don't think it should be taken so literally. One idea would be not to use the specific colors of the flag, but to adapt or take them as a reference, whether they are more opaque, lighter or darker colors.
- Very good effort in the variety of graphics that you present! however there are some that are not perceived in the same style as everything else. In general, there is a lack of cohesion between the elements of the brand.
- The illustrations you used on the bag are the best part of your project! They should be reflected in other parts of the brand.
- The reason for the accent in the logo is confusing, what does it represent? It is not clear what it is used for and the reason behind its color changes.
Thank you again for sharing your talent with us!
We wish you much success! 🙌🏻
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@heavy Thank you very much for the feedback, I will take into account each of the corrections and thus improve the proposal.
For me it has been a pleasure to have taken this course and to acquire knowledge about enrichment of a brand.
Thank you!
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