congrats on your finished projects! I see a nice mix of media here used very effectively to show movement and depth. It's interesting how you interpreted the same video reference in different ways for both versions. I like how you have a less literal color scheme in the second, and some of the perspective issues seem to be worked out there too.
If you want a bit of constructive feedback, I think there are a lot of points of interest in your sketch, and it could be clearer which area is your main focal point. If it is the church tower, maybe you could add a very light wash over the building in the foreground to make it less contrast. If the front building is your focus, you could use less white outlines in the church tower.
But the picture works fine without this too, so it's just a suggestion for next time! 👏👏👏👏
Hi Eleanor,
Thank you for the feedback, I can see that better now, the church tower should be less in the foreground...
Thanks for the nice workshop and some helpful tips! I haven't done anything for a long time, although I've been drawing and painting for so long... but it's just a matter of practice and drawing daily helps to loosen up a bit... Greetings!
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herbcoil
Teacher Pluscongrats on your finished projects! I see a nice mix of media here used very effectively to show movement and depth. It's interesting how you interpreted the same video reference in different ways for both versions. I like how you have a less literal color scheme in the second, and some of the perspective issues seem to be worked out there too.
If you want a bit of constructive feedback, I think there are a lot of points of interest in your sketch, and it could be clearer which area is your main focal point. If it is the church tower, maybe you could add a very light wash over the building in the foreground to make it less contrast. If the front building is your focus, you could use less white outlines in the church tower.
But the picture works fine without this too, so it's just a suggestion for next time! 👏👏👏👏
dannyknebel
Hi Eleanor,
Thank you for the feedback, I can see that better now, the church tower should be less in the foreground...
Thanks for the nice workshop and some helpful tips! I haven't done anything for a long time, although I've been drawing and painting for so long... but it's just a matter of practice and drawing daily helps to loosen up a bit... Greetings!
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