Hi @rcdisegno !
just great!! I love it! this is my feedback!
I think it's perfect at the level of assembly, composition, colors, concept and I encourage you to create more compositions like this and share them.
If I had to say something else (and it is on a conceptual level, not montage) I would tell you that it is a little strange that the moon is ahead of the clouds. Perhaps for another version you could add some clouds in front of the moon, but as I tell you it is a decision of the author (an artistic question).
Thanks for the Feedback! @peterporta
I have seen your projects are incredible! If you ever need help, so be it holding the light here I am!
My website is www.rcdisegno.com in case you want to see more of my projects, in fact I have some photographs that I take from my travels (photography is my hobby-passion, that's why my desire to learn more every time).
(The photos are where in the rectangle where you see an air balloon and where there is a girl almost naked for a condom project) Feedback from that is also appreciated! :)
Hi @rcdisegno
the photos are cool and also the designs. the condom project is very original!
Now you can expand the book with the compositions that you are very good at!
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rcdisegno
Hi Peter, how are you?
Could you give me feedback on my project to improve?
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Teacher PlusHi @rcdisegno !
just great!! I love it! this is my feedback!
I think it's perfect at the level of assembly, composition, colors, concept and I encourage you to create more compositions like this and share them.
If I had to say something else (and it is on a conceptual level, not montage) I would tell you that it is a little strange that the moon is ahead of the clouds. Perhaps for another version you could add some clouds in front of the moon, but as I tell you it is a decision of the author (an artistic question).
Good job and want to see more!
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Thanks for the Feedback! @peterporta
I have seen your projects are incredible! If you ever need help, so be it holding the light here I am!
My website is www.rcdisegno.com in case you want to see more of my projects, in fact I have some photographs that I take from my travels (photography is my hobby-passion, that's why my desire to learn more every time).
(The photos are where in the rectangle where you see an air balloon and where there is a girl almost naked for a condom project) Feedback from that is also appreciated! :)
Cheers,
Roselyn.
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Teacher PlusHi @rcdisegno
the photos are cool and also the designs. the condom project is very original!
Now you can expand the book with the compositions that you are very good at!
keep in touch!
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