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Il mio progetto del corso Storytelling per fumetti: "Il mercato nero"

André Lima Araújo · 2022-05-30T16:46:37+02:00

Hello Letizia. Well, I have to say this is quite good! The style is there, so is the substance. I can follow the story without any words, which is always a great sign in any comic. And I love that you adapted a bit of what I had into your own thing. My advice can only be generic because there are no obvious flaws: keep drawing comics so you can improve your anatomy, perspective and storytelling levels bit by bit. Incremental improvements are hard to notice at first, but after a few months and a many pages/stories done, you'll see massive jumps in quality. My only specific criticism here would be to use different shades of grey tones: darker to the closer stuff and then progressively lighter and lighter. Just like it happens in real life, contrast fades in the distance because of our atmosphere. It's a great trick to create depth.

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E' stato davvero divertente ricominciare a fare tavole di fumetto. Questo corso mi ha dato la spinta per rimettermi in gioco e che dire? Mi sono davvero divertita.
Ho cercato di seguire i consigli dell'insegnante e da questo anche la scelta di ricreare una situazione piuttosto analoga, per esercitarmi in tutto quello che ho imparato durante il corso.
Ho svolto il lavoro totalmente in digitale, con clip studio paint. La mia è una scelta logistica e ormai di abitudine, in quanto da qualche tempo lavoro completamente in digitale.
Non ho potuto mettere le tavole con i balloon per una questione di quantità ma avevo previsto anche quelli!
Aspetto con ansia le correzioni, intanto ringrazio :D

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andrelimaaraujo Teacher Plus
30.05.2022 at 16:46

Hello Letizia. Well, I have to say this is quite good! The style is there, so is the substance. I can follow the story without any words, which is always a great sign in any comic. And I love that you adapted a bit of what I had into your own thing. My advice can only be generic because there are no obvious flaws: keep drawing comics so you can improve your anatomy, perspective and storytelling levels bit by bit. Incremental improvements are hard to notice at first, but after a few months and a many pages/stories done, you'll see massive jumps in quality. My only specific criticism here would be to use different shades of grey tones: darker to the closer stuff and then progressively lighter and lighter. Just like it happens in real life, contrast fades in the distance because of our atmosphere. It's a great trick to create depth.
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castagna536
31.05.2022 at 12:06

@andrelimaaraujo Grazie mille per il feedback e i suggerimenti! Continuerò sicuramente. Grazie ancora per il corso :D
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