My project in Female Cartoon Character Design with Procreate course

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• isabella.agosti

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  04.03.2022 at 18:39

  

  Great job Célia 😍 I love how you handled lights and shadows, and her expression too!

  My feedback for future works would be:
  

  
  
  • Since I can't see any part of it, it's not very clear to me what she's doing with her left arm. I would have maybe drawn it with the hand on her hip and the elbow bent behind in order to highlight even more the discomfort she's clearly showing with her annoyed expression. But if you want to keep it hidden behind her body I would suggest to show just a bit of elbow behind her back to show more clearly that her arm is straight and in a resting position.
    
  • Since the background is very light and more or less the same colour of your highlights, it's a bit hard to distinguish some outlines at the moment
  (for example her chin and the lower part of her arm). My suggestion would be to make it a bit darker or to change its hue. But I I would also love to see her with a detailed background to know more about her backstory!
  

  Overall it's a really beautiful illustration! Good work 🧡

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