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Mi Proyecto del curso Motivos para repetir
by Izaskun Alonso Saratxaga @izk71
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Hola. Soy Izaskun y soy pintora.
El tema que he elegido es la uva, el viñedo en Euskalherria, el campo y el mar, para la realización de un packaging de botella de txakoli familiar, que es un vino blanco.
Aquí está el proyecto. Espero vuestros comentarios para mejorarlo.
Los primeros dibujos están hechos con rotulador
si que me gustaría en el resultado un poco más de movilidad. Hay técnicas de "enladrillado" para mover el módulo, no?. Esto es un tema pendiente para un futuro curso. Las uvas más grandes son demasiado paralelas y cuando se repite mucho no queda bien.
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moniquilla
Teacher PlusHi @izk71
wine and wine labels are a very interesting world
I tell you several things,
I really like how it remains in paper wrapping the bottle, it has that air of artisan, familiar ...
I like those tones better that you see there
In other images they are more raised in color, have you looked at that?
I think the "less intense color" option is better.
The image of the bottle with the paper looks great, but the image of the bottle looks worse, you may need to look for a higher resolution image.
And finally, maybe you could make the big grapes a little smaller, just so that they don't stand out so much, because there is a lot of difference in size and it makes the look take us there or that in your initial composition there are 2 of those elements placed differently so that they are not so noticeable
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izk71
Thanks for your comment
The color theme is wrong on screen, I don't know why, I'll try to change it, but they are lower saturation colors, kind of what appears on the paper in the bottle. Regarding the size, you are right because the position of the grape is very noticeable due to its roundness. As soon as I can, I will make modifications and upload it.
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The color issue is fixed. They were saved in cmyk and not rgb and when uploading them they changed.
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