My observations to your project are the following:
-You can define more the figures that build the hair and the silhouette that it generates, this will help to cubed it in space.
- Perhaps you can darken your planes in shadows very slightly, as well as the complementary light that outlines the left side. This will help to further separate your planes in light and your planes in shadow, which are perhaps very similar in
tonal value.
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renataguiar026
Beautiful!
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ruiveran
Teacher PlusVery good work!
My observations to your project are the following:
-You can define more the figures that build the hair and the silhouette that it generates, this will help to cubed it in space.
- Perhaps you can darken your planes in shadows very slightly, as well as the complementary light that outlines the left side. This will help to further separate your planes in light and your planes in shadow, which are perhaps very similar in
tonal value.
Congratulations on finishing the course!
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