Hello Help!
First I want to thank you for having participated in the course. I hope you enjoyed it a lot and that you have learned.
I like the presentation of your work. The space you leave on the sheet to the sides, makes the viewer focus their attention on the work itself. I also see that you use several techniques which I think is super, since certain areas, shapes, textures are better developed with certain techniques.
I see there are white lines in various areas of the job. I do not know if they are lines that you have erased before or lines that you made with the eraser at the end to give texture to the work. In either case, I find them interesting and I think they fit the job well. I also think you could explore them a bit more in future projects.
I really like the light treatment. I think you have this clear concept and as you can see it helps a lot to generate depth in your work. You have some really good blurring and you applied the gray values correctly. In general I think your work is very good. I congratulate you.
I think my only problem is with the clouds, especially the ones that are near the center at the top of the sheet. I feel like they don't look like clouds yet as they can look more diffuse to resemble a cloud. This is easy to fix. You can take a smudger or, failing that, a cotton swab (or even your finger) and run it over the pencil line. This will soften the edges and overall strokes.
Excellent work. Thank you for participating in the course and until the next time.
Greetings
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rhinunez
Teacher PlusHello Help!
First I want to thank you for having participated in the course. I hope you enjoyed it a lot and that you have learned.
I like the presentation of your work. The space you leave on the sheet to the sides, makes the viewer focus their attention on the work itself. I also see that you use several techniques which I think is super, since certain areas, shapes, textures are better developed with certain techniques.
I see there are white lines in various areas of the job. I do not know if they are lines that you have erased before or lines that you made with the eraser at the end to give texture to the work. In either case, I find them interesting and I think they fit the job well. I also think you could explore them a bit more in future projects.
I really like the light treatment. I think you have this clear concept and as you can see it helps a lot to generate depth in your work. You have some really good blurring and you applied the gray values correctly. In general I think your work is very good. I congratulate you.
I think my only problem is with the clouds, especially the ones that are near the center at the top of the sheet. I feel like they don't look like clouds yet as they can look more diffuse to resemble a cloud. This is easy to fix. You can take a smudger or, failing that, a cotton swab (or even your finger) and run it over the pencil line. This will soften the edges and overall strokes.
Excellent work. Thank you for participating in the course and until the next time.
Greetings
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