Hello colleagues, I would like to contribute.
I think the first paragraph is confusing, notice that they start talking about branding and end up talking about advertising. In addition, I believe that cohesion could be improved by avoiding the repetition of "time and money".
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Hello colleagues, I would like to contribute.
I think the first paragraph is confusing, notice that they start talking about branding and end up talking about advertising. In addition, I believe that cohesion could be improved by avoiding the repetition of "time and money".
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