thanks for sharing!
I really like your color palette and choice of proportions for the composition. The fact that this set of flowers and plants occupy all the space, leaving the moon almost the same size, makes it much more interesting to see. The contrasts do not necessarily give us the illusion of distant or close shots, but it shows that it is your style, it is a very yours proposal, and it works very well. That the strokes are noticeable also gives it a lot of personality.
I would suggest you explore more with the thick black line with which you solve the texture. Perhaps strokes, points, lines, of different kinds. Not necessarily detailed, it is only to give more texture planes to your proposal, to see what you find.
I congratulate you!
Thanks for the detail of feedback!
I loved the course for the good exploration and direction you gave us within the course.
I understand what you mean so that I explore more and it is a super proposal, I will try it. I did it in my A5 study book, so I will also enlarge it.
Thank you so much for taking the time to write.
Jime
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luciacoz
Teacher Plusthanks for sharing!
I really like your color palette and choice of proportions for the composition. The fact that this set of flowers and plants occupy all the space, leaving the moon almost the same size, makes it much more interesting to see. The contrasts do not necessarily give us the illusion of distant or close shots, but it shows that it is your style, it is a very yours proposal, and it works very well. That the strokes are noticeable also gives it a lot of personality.
I would suggest you explore more with the thick black line with which you solve the texture. Perhaps strokes, points, lines, of different kinds. Not necessarily detailed, it is only to give more texture planes to your proposal, to see what you find.
I congratulate you!
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jimexo
PlusThanks for the detail of feedback!
I loved the course for the good exploration and direction you gave us within the course.
I understand what you mean so that I explore more and it is a super proposal, I will try it. I did it in my A5 study book, so I will also enlarge it.
Thank you so much for taking the time to write.
Jime
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