Excellent work Paco! You recreated much of my image very well and added your own creativity to the image. I really love the statue that you used for this. The lighting on this photo you used is really good and you did a great job matching the tones. I almost like this statue better than mine for this image because it gives the feeling like they are "marching into the sea", which I find very poignant. I think the sky looks great with the lighting effects you added and I like a lot of the extra birds that you used. I think the parrots and seagulls are working really well and I like the ones falling into shadow behind the statue. My only critiques are that are some birds like the ibis might be a little too dark, and I would bring down the saturation a bit in the underwater section. But overall, very cool image and I really like that it is kind of an explosion of color and movement, to contrast with the solid gray of the statue.
So I would say keep working with lighting, shading, and color in your projects to hone and perfect your techniques, and experiment with more types of imagery. Based on this piece and your previous work I think you are on a really good track to create some amazing work. Cheers!
@nick_pedersen Thank you very much for your feedback, I usually have that little problem with the lights and shadows, I must practice it a lot more, I will correct what you suggest, I will upload the photo to my instagram, greetings
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nick_pedersen
Teacher PlusExcellent work Paco! You recreated much of my image very well and added your own creativity to the image. I really love the statue that you used for this. The lighting on this photo you used is really good and you did a great job matching the tones. I almost like this statue better than mine for this image because it gives the feeling like they are "marching into the sea", which I find very poignant. I think the sky looks great with the lighting effects you added and I like a lot of the extra birds that you used. I think the parrots and seagulls are working really well and I like the ones falling into shadow behind the statue. My only critiques are that are some birds like the ibis might be a little too dark, and I would bring down the saturation a bit in the underwater section. But overall, very cool image and I really like that it is kind of an explosion of color and movement, to contrast with the solid gray of the statue.
So I would say keep working with lighting, shading, and color in your projects to hone and perfect your techniques, and experiment with more types of imagery. Based on this piece and your previous work I think you are on a really good track to create some amazing work. Cheers!
pacovi
@nick_pedersen Thank you very much for your feedback, I usually have that little problem with the lights and shadows, I must practice it a lot more, I will correct what you suggest, I will upload the photo to my instagram, greetings
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