Hello, thanks for sharing your project. It is very good color palette and composition. You have made good use of neutral colors.
I would just tell you to watch a bit with the contrasts.
Maybe it would have been a good idea to tone up the hat a bit, make the red more saturated and maybe find some areas to darken the color a bit. If you look closely, you try to imagine this illustration in black and white, you would see that it is practically made up of rather light gray colors, and there are no dark grays or blacks.
This makes the illustration very flat and has little Contrast. if you notice the character sticks to the background. If you added some darker detail, or more saturated with color, you would be able to separate the elements a little more and create more rhythm and depth.
@gemma_capdevila Hi Gemma, thanks for the comments. With the help of the dear photoshop I changed the color of the hat and some parts of the beard, I already uploaded it to the project so you can see it, to see what you think now. Thanks for the course :-)
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Gemma Capdevila
Teacher PlusHello, thanks for sharing your project. It is very good color palette and composition. You have made good use of neutral colors.
I would just tell you to watch a bit with the contrasts.
Maybe it would have been a good idea to tone up the hat a bit, make the red more saturated and maybe find some areas to darken the color a bit. If you look closely, you try to imagine this illustration in black and white, you would see that it is practically made up of rather light gray colors, and there are no dark grays or blacks.
This makes the illustration very flat and has little Contrast. if you notice the character sticks to the background. If you added some darker detail, or more saturated with color, you would be able to separate the elements a little more and create more rhythm and depth.
I hope you serve my advice. Good job 💙
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@gemma_capdevila Hi Gemma, thanks for the comments. With the help of the dear photoshop I changed the color of the hat and some parts of the beard, I already uploaded it to the project so you can see it, to see what you think now. Thanks for the course :-)
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Gemma Capdevila
Teacher Plus@epocroa great! Do you see that it works much better now? 💙👌🏽
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