I want to thank you for taking this class. I am very happy that you enjoyed it and I hope it has served you a lot.
As for your project, I love to see the work processes. Starting with the sketch, I think it's very good, since it gives us a good idea of how the final work will be. I also value those notes that you took that in the long run are like a follow-up plan of what you want to see in the final result.
I also like the different values that you give to graphite taking into account the distance of the elements in view of the viewer. You took care that the background has a lighter and less contrasting tone than the elements that are closer, which helps to reinforce the feeling of depth.
The textures that you achieved with the walls seem to me to be very well achieved, they give a good idea of the material from which the construction walls are made. The same happens with the bricks in the fireplace and the structure in general.
That said, I think the mountains in the background may have had a lighter hue than they are. They have helped you reinforce the theme of depth in your work. I also think that you could have used a blurr for the sky in order to make it look more even and better resemble the uniformity of the sky. The same happens with clouds.
Overall it's a good job. I congratulate you for your effort and I really hope that you keep practicing. I believe that the problems that I saw in your work are minimal and that practice will help you overcome them without problem.
Thanks again for participating in the course.
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rhinunez
Teacher PlusI want to thank you for taking this class. I am very happy that you enjoyed it and I hope it has served you a lot.
As for your project, I love to see the work processes. Starting with the sketch, I think it's very good, since it gives us a good idea of how the final work will be. I also value those notes that you took that in the long run are like a follow-up plan of what you want to see in the final result.
I also like the different values that you give to graphite taking into account the distance of the elements in view of the viewer. You took care that the background has a lighter and less contrasting tone than the elements that are closer, which helps to reinforce the feeling of depth.
The textures that you achieved with the walls seem to me to be very well achieved, they give a good idea of the material from which the construction walls are made. The same happens with the bricks in the fireplace and the structure in general.
That said, I think the mountains in the background may have had a lighter hue than they are. They have helped you reinforce the theme of depth in your work. I also think that you could have used a blurr for the sky in order to make it look more even and better resemble the uniformity of the sky. The same happens with clouds.
Overall it's a good job. I congratulate you for your effort and I really hope that you keep practicing. I believe that the problems that I saw in your work are minimal and that practice will help you overcome them without problem.
Thanks again for participating in the course.
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