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Mi Proyecto del curso: ADOPTA'M
by Gemma i Laia @gemmavidalsole
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Estoy muy contenta del resultado aunque se que hay muuuuuchas cosas a mejorar.
La verdad es que lo he hecho todo con Adobe Animate y me he apañado como he podido en varios temas, sobretodo en exportar el vídeo correctamente.
El vídeo forma parte de la presentación de un proyecto personal, un juego de mesa sobre ayudar a los animales abandonados. Espero que pronto esté en la plataforma Verkami para que se pueda hacer realidad.
@TRIMONO espero que os guste!
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Trimono
Teacher PlusHi Gemma,
we are looking at the exercise. It is interesting and it works, but we will tell you some things that will help you improve your skills for the next project:
- The short opens with a general shot that you don't give time, you start the shot directly in the middle of a zoom. It is better to give a couple of seconds to the general plane before zooming in, think that it is important to show things in an orderly way and give the audience time to locate themselves comfortably.
- The shaking of the dog requires a little more information to function. As it is, it is not clear if he is shivering from the cold, if he is dreaming and that is why he is moving or if it is something else. The most direct and easy way to solve that is to put a sound that helps us better understand the action. Of course, if we changed the animation to improve the interpretation of the character it would be clearer, but if you want to solve it with little work, a sound may be enough.
- The bag of potatoes that approaches the camera remains nailed for a few frames before cutting to the plane of the dog. This stop slows the flow of the action. It is best if the flat cut occurs during the movement of the bag closer to the camera. That will make the action flow better.
- When the dog is caught by a character, as you have not animated the action of catching the dog, it could perhaps be solved with a fade to black. We see the man approaching, we fade to black, we go out of the black fusing to the plane in which the dog is in the arms of a character.
- As a detail, I would tell you that in the last text placard, where it says "Where dogs and cats live happily in a home!", I think the "where" should go without an accent, because the accent there indicates a question, as if saying "Where are cats and dogs going to be happy?" When in fact it is rather appropriate to say that "X is the place where cats and dogs will be happy."
I hope I have been helpful with these comments.
Thank you very much for the work and I apologize that we could not give an answer before.
A hug,
Paul.
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