Hi Mohamed!
I like so much your work!
First , at point ( 1 ) I tell you what I like and I think it is really showing your best artistic features and second ( 2 )what you can improve.
1) I love your hand outline. It is very vibrant, analog and alive, both sketchy, that means true and natural, but at the same time very sure and light. In addition your outline is not always black, but brown or in other colors.
I also like the fact that you do not use the outline for the green, it makes it more fresh. The colors in general are very pleasant!
2) The only thing I am not sure of, is the fantastic element right up, it is not well readable and too different from the rest of the composition, too unfinished.
Try to find more balance in the whole picture. The work is very pleasant on the left, but on the right, where the wall and your beautiful line is well readable, everything becomes suddenly like a rough sketch and I do not find harmony between the two parts of the illustration.
Please look at your nice work tomorrow, not now, with new eyes, and consider it just like some other artist did it, so it will be easier for you to appreciate and criticize your work. Congratulations! Pease go on with your inspiring art and stay in touch!
@carlo_stanga Thank you so much for your trustful and useful comment, I really appreciate it and I am looking forward if you make any future courses
much love
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Hi Mohamed!
I like so much your work!
First , at point ( 1 ) I tell you what I like and I think it is really showing your best artistic features and second ( 2 )what you can improve.
1) I love your hand outline. It is very vibrant, analog and alive, both sketchy, that means true and natural, but at the same time very sure and light. In addition your outline is not always black, but brown or in other colors.
I also like the fact that you do not use the outline for the green, it makes it more fresh. The colors in general are very pleasant!
2) The only thing I am not sure of, is the fantastic element right up, it is not well readable and too different from the rest of the composition, too unfinished.
Try to find more balance in the whole picture. The work is very pleasant on the left, but on the right, where the wall and your beautiful line is well readable, everything becomes suddenly like a rough sketch and I do not find harmony between the two parts of the illustration.
Please look at your nice work tomorrow, not now, with new eyes, and consider it just like some other artist did it, so it will be easier for you to appreciate and criticize your work. Congratulations! Pease go on with your inspiring art and stay in touch!
@carlo_stanga Thank you so much for your trustful and useful comment, I really appreciate it and I am looking forward if you make any future courses
much love
Pleasure, I like your personal style, and thank you for your kind review! See you Soon here again I hope! Best
Carlo
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